Talk:Garudharma

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Hi Robert, This looks good. I suggest moving the third paragraph from the lead into a separate section, or into the article on Bhukinies. Dorje108 (talk) 15:06, 2 June 2018 (UTC)

Also, maybe the usage of 'especial' vs. 'special' is different in British English vs. American English? Dorje108 (talk) 15:08, 2 June 2018 (UTC)